2009 NATIONAL ESSAY CONTEST WINNERS

The following essays received the top honors this year at the national level contest. The topic of the essay was

“What National Treasure would you take on your deep Space mission and why?”


FIRST PLACE
Alexander J. Hood of Madison, Alabama
was awarded First Place. He received a
$2000 US Savings Bond and a National
Sojourners Plaque. Redstone Chapter
#353 sponsored the student.

NATIONAL TREASURES Earth Date: November 11, 2276
Personal Log

My small spaceship arrived at the Interplanetary Spaceport at Epsilon Eridani, just 62 trillion miles away from earth. I left Earth from the Cape Canaveral International Space Terminal. It took just a couple of days to reach Epsilon Eridani but my ship was tiny and cramped and I am excited about stepping foot on a new planet. My name is Paul Johnson and I am a professor of hist ory at Berkley. I volunteered for this mission to Epsilon Eridaril because I think the lessons that America has learned are good lessons for other cultures and beings to learn too. I’ve come to talk to a gathering of Eridani people which will be transmitted to their whole world to tell them how America has lasted 500 years as a major nation on planet Earth.

Back on Earth in America today it is Veteran’s Day, a national holiday. How did America survive for 500 years? America has endured because of the Constitution. We have some great symbols of our country but it wasn’t a symbol like the Liberty Bell that protected America, but it is the American soldier. In my holographic broadcast to the Eridani World, I am going to present Uncle Joe to the Eridani Prime Chancellor Zurick. “Uncle Joe” is an android, an accumulation of all the memories of all the veterans of every war- America wouldn’t even have been a country unless great, great, great, great, great uncle Joe hadn’t picked up a rifle to defend his farmland in the French and Indian war. He is the Minute Man from the Revolutionary War. He is also Paul Revere, George Washington, General Robert E. Lee and General Ulysses S. Grant. He is all the foot soldiers of the Civil War. Uncle Joe is a Rough Rider, he is a Doughboy, and he is 101 Airborne in World War II. My Uncle Joe is both of my ancestors who fought in World War II and in the Vietnam War. He is a Prisoner of War in Vietnam. He is a soldier that went missing and was never heard from again. He is the sailor from the Gulf Wars. Uncle Joe is a veteran of the first alien attack on our world. Once Uncle Joe starts talking, like my grandfathers, he will be hard to stop telling one of his stories, but that’s ok, he is a wealth of knowledge.

The one problem we couldn’t fix with Uncle Joe is not really a problem at all. Uncle Joe, being the first accumulated knowledge android, can’t stop talking to himself when he is alone, sharing memories with long lost comrades. Uncle Joe is able to talk to the Generals from all these wars, to have his questions answered. I can only imagine what their collective opinions will turn out to be. Hopefully, the advice and knowledge of Uncle Joe will help the people of Eridani survive as Long as America, if not longer.

SECOND PLACE
Rebecca K. Diamond of Omaha, Nebraska
was awarded Second Place. She received a
$1000 US Savings Bond and a
National Sojourners Plaque.
Omaha Chapter #19 sponsored the student.

As I walk down the tree lined vistas, I see the hundreds of thousands of small white marble tombstones perfectly aligned like soldiers marching off to battle. The tombs tones of Arlington National Cemetery mark the graves of over 290,000 ordinary men and women who served this great country. When I was asked to travel to a new planet, I knew I wanted to take a single tombstone to represent the service, dedication, and sacrifice that so many citizens have given to make the United States of America a dominant nation for 500 years.

This tombstone embodies the service of ordinary men and women. Service may have come in the form of being a member of the armed forces, being president or other political office, acting as a judge of traveling to outer space. Engraved on the amphitheater in Arlington National Cemetery is a quote, “When we assumed the soldier, we did not lay aside the citizen”. While each of these individuals may not have been a soldier, each was an ordinary citizen who served this country. It takes the service of many to build a great nation.

The tombstone marks the grave of a dedicated citizen. From the Unknown Soldier to President John F Kennedy, from a young buck private to a great general, from astronauts to Supreme Court justices, these men and women all dedicated their lives to this country. Some served in the military; others became leaders in politics or space exploration, while others worked to ensure that all our citizens’ rights were upheld. Most would not consider themselves to be great; each was just doing his or her job. Their dedication shows that citizens care about the beliefs and philosophies that are a part of our country’s foundation.

Lastly, this tombstone represents the sacrifice each individual gave to his count ry. Each citizen gave time and energy to learn and do a job. These jobs often required the sacrifice of being away from home, family and friends. Many gave the ultimate sacrifice of their life while actively serving this country. Without these sacrifices, this country would not have survived as a dominant nation for so many years.

This tombstone is small and white. Whom this tombstone represents is not important. Rather, it represents a person who gave service, dedication, and sacrifice for this country. These qualities are all needed to support the ideals of freedom, the backbone of this country. When I was asked to travel to a new planet, I knew I wanted to take a single tombstone. The United States of America has been a dominant nation for 500 years because these ordinary citizens whom the tombstone represents.

THIRD PLACE
Taylor J. Vanstraten of Pensacola, Florida
was awarded Third Place. She received a $500 US Savings Bond
and a National Sojourners Plaque.
Five Flags of Pensacola Chapter #460 sponsored the student.

The 500th Anniversary of our Nation marked a turning point in our history; for on this day, a group of students, including myself, were sent on a mission to a far dist ant planet to explain our nation’s growth and prosperity... This is our story....

As the students descended the ramp off their cozy shuttle and onto the newly discovered planet X; their minds began to wonder what they would see after they completely exited the ship. It all came in a rush. They were welcomed with rolling hills and a beautiful, bubbling riverbed, not to mention the strange green men that began speaking in some foreign dialect. Next, the students unpacked their treasures and went their separate ways to show this strange world America’s accomplishments and to instill the ideals of America among these strange creatures. I left my group heading in what my scanners indicated as west; under my arm was THE original United States’ Constitution. I had it in a case that was secured to not allow air or any liquid that could possibly contaminate the document. I choose this document because it is the foundation of our nations entire centralized government and is the basis of our legal system today. I was scheduled to meet with one of their government officials to discuss their politic al system and compare it to ours.

I met him in his home and we began our discussion. First I explained how our government works. The Constitution was created by our nation’s founding fathers during a meeting of the Continental Congress. It took many long, argumentative hours of sweating men yelling, but eventually, the Constitution was ratified by nine of the thirteen original colonies. It replaced the Articles of Confederation which were inefficient to run our new, independent country. The Bill of Rights was soon added which gave all Americans their basic rights which is the life of our great nation.

He listened intently as I continued my brief account of the beginning of our nation’s history. He only asked one question: Why, of all your nation’s treasures, did you choose to bring this document: I concluded our conversation of our country’s history by replying that it is the glue that holds the United States of America together and has kept America the Dominant power of Earth for 500 years To conclude I asked how he felt about America and he said that he learned many things and he would pass this story onto his superiors. I felt I had an impact on this man and soon, maybe even his country’s government. It was a valuable day and it made me appreciate our country even more so than ever.



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